Sunday, March 01, 2009

The Thing (Extensive Revisit)

.
.
.
Prelude
I extended what I
could possibly extend
but I

never reached whatever
I
was reaching for, for I

was either some-
thing or some-
thing went awfully
wrong totally
out of your context,
see, I blame it on
both
my hefty buoyancy
&
your tight con-
text



The Thing
The thing is
sometimes when I say the thing,
you tear the air complaining about everything
have you heard about something that has one wing and can't do anything but fly?

Once, I heard the thing
declaring that anything
that lusts for everything
should build a cloud-castle and grow feather fields around it ……………………………………………………………….yet twice I fell …………………………………………………..on my head
………………………………….all over the sky

because nothing explains if I’m supposed to sing:
………………...........................................ding-nada-ding
or sharpen my sensitive string

to beat the hell out of the thing
till you cry.


Finale
One thing is to say that you love the thing;
other thing is to love talking out the thing
adding one thing to the other won't
reveal the fierce, unconventional finding:
"Any claim blindly aimed to a merry piƱata clinging on a dead tree isn't worth anything but a mere thing" – DV

8 comments:

Jewaira said...

Poeticizing about things that are seemingly nonsensical is the best manner in which to go about living in order to leave others pondering on the possible meanings and never, ever leaving you subject to suspect or malpractice.

Do what you do, DV.

Jason Gusmann said...

prelude: "if you force it, it'll never fit" - george clinton

the thing: a zen koan about the sound of one wing flying

finale: one thing + other thing = something/anything?

Harmonie22 said...

Oh tell it, tell it!
Nice work, DV. Lovely wordplay double-talk form. Love the 'I' book-ends in the first line.

Keep on sharpening your sensitive string.

PS You know, women, we want it all but we don't really know what that means, especially in our 20's.

Devil Finch said...

Jewaira,
Jason,
Harmonie22,

Thank you all!

The thoughts expressed in your comments constitute the only significance of my words.

Please keep your context wide-open and enjoy ;)

Sherry said...

Such a thIng!
You like wearing a sensual layer while talking about the thIng and diving into the cOntext.
Dont know whether it is an armor or a playful cape but it for sure softens the truth and makes the apple easier to digest...

Devil Finch said...

Sherry --

Nice caps ;)

It's niether an armor or cape. It's a layer that cannot help but to appear, but where? Is it in the text I wrote or in the context you chose?

Anyway, hope you enjoyed it.

L.R.643 said...

ur choice of words in the prelude were of a different mood, no?

Devil Finch said...

L.R.643 --


Good observation. I recommend searching prelude as a musical term.