i admit
i snuck to your cellars,
had a taste of
your red, red wine
it still lingers and i still
flip from the thrill
and as i confess
the pleasure is all mine
vines’ charmer
let me lead you to my vines
are these your eyes
studying what i sip?
i love to think so and
i diabolically smile. as
i imagine your tongue
caressing your upper lip,
wife of picasso chuckles
and you hide
behind the oak barrel
vines’ charmer
let me lead you to my vines
i admit
i tend to picture
your legs interlaced
with mine, telling
me how intoxicating
is my wine
vines’ charmer
let me lead you to my vines
i admit i
get elated when i
inhale your scent.
when i exhale, i
feel a sweet pain,
as i feel your intoxication
withdrawing from my vein. i
don’t want to let go, but
you keep telling me no
vines’ charmer
let me in
into your vines
Monday, August 18, 2008
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8 comments:
Devil Finch!
I really really liked this.
There's both a subtle and direct sensuousness to this piece that I truly enjoyed and found insidiously intoxicating as the wine and vine imagery:)
So nice to read your poetry again.
A delicious piece was dipped gently in eroticism by your hands and passed onto her...She better take and appreciate it or keep the cellar doors shut:)
Very sensuous... I loved it!
It's beautiful how you play with words... great rhythm as well.
bravo!
When did you come back? :)Last time I checked the blog wasn't updated.
I love the new template. So much more beckoning.
Your poem is sensory bliss.
harmonie22--
I'm glad you liked it. So nice to have you here. Please come more often :)
sherry--
Don't you know it's not allowed to write blurbs more delicious than the poem itself?? And btw Shutting the doors never keeps me away.
disturbed stranger--
I'm glad you loved it. But I'm not sure whether I play with words or they play me.
jewaira--
Yeah, I tend to be furtive.
The white space is so comfortable. I'm thinking of moving to wordpress though.
Thank you ladies!
Purely sensational?..
No, I'd be understating this specific piece...
lone ranger'ss--
I'm humbled. So nice of you to stop by and share your thoughts.
Well don't be furtive about moving to Wordpress. Got to keep tabs on you :P
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